As we stood by the lake side
An expanse so wide
For us to see
Then you and me
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nice imagery... can see the arctic lake with autumn around and sauntering leaves...well painted!
not a word out of place not an emotion redundant...and you give me the right to tear your poetry into pieces! i know you did that with confidence, doc...
This for me is adorable. 'Thaw the thrill...' this would really make one think. THanks for sharing us this poem. Would get a copy of this. Good morning.
Beautiful write...i liked the way the reflections turn eloquent there...10
You paint well with words. A beautiful poem. May the muse always be with you. Kind regards, Sandra
What an absolutely wonderful picture you paint, with such gorgeous imagery and eloquence. This is beautiful and touches the soul. Makes you realize how much of life is beyond our control, just like the weather - we weather the storms as best we can, both in life and love. Brilliant! Linda :)
This is beautiful, the theme nad language with amazing scenes.10
nice..so calm..makes me see the picture through words.
thnax for the nice words....blessings