Suki Nakamura

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Sunday, August 16, 2009

Building Life Upon A Wish Comments

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Upon a wish shall she build
The pillar of her life

Upon her dreams shall she
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Patti Masterman 29 September 2009

These words seem like an enchantment but that there is so much truth in them. I just realized, reading your words, that every wonderful thing comes to us, we achieve first with a dream of the thing, and only then can it become real for us. Thanks for all this beauty.

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Sonya Florentino 01 September 2009

without dreams how can one endure life....?

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T.S. Wilkins 16 August 2009

This poem captured my attention from the first two lines. It is a beautiful description of how important dreams and wishes are in a person's life and how they are the foundation that one may build their life upon. Beautifully written.

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