Brown Eyes Comments

Beautiful deception of brown eyes! A fabulous poem! !

Poem: 18067583 - Brown Eyes Member: Suresh Kumar Ek Comment: The love slowly develop into Simple acknowledgement With surrender because She was a hard nut to crack. Intricately interwoven love poem Admirations Sir Suresh

The love slowly develop into Simple acknowledgement With surrender because She was a hard nut to crack. Intricately interwoven love poem Admirations Sir Suresh

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So well penned, love the flow and rhyming.

Brilliant poem of love to muscled body, so uplifting, with true passion and happy end!

Well now the romance for my brown eyes grow love it, ''inviting me near but not to fight'' favourite line.

A nice description of the inviting eyes... Brown eyes with sparkling light, Standing before me just to right, Inviting me near but not to fight, May be closer views and clear sight, The initial moments... I could see whole world in it, Two eyes as if deem lamps lit, Why sudden interest in me hit? Muscled body with physique fit, The initiation... Kind gesture with open invite, Desires grew with ambition ignite, It was not time to say good night, Grab the opportunity as the time was right, The final touch... When I look back and simply ponder? No simple answer but only wonder, No clouds to make loud thunder, Simple acknowledgement with easy surrender You have excelled in every way, dear poet. Many thanks for this melodious encounter. Made me feel embarrassed once again. Thanks for the poem. Subhas

Close up on Brown eyes..love lit..thanks for sharing

The mirror of those eyes set you apart from the start with love and a never ending journey...lovely...regards

a beautiful poem about a pair of brown eyes

:) falling in love with the one having brown eyes... and spending the whole life peacefully and happily... wow! amazing write...

:) falling in love with the one having brown eyes... and spending the whole life peacefully and happily... wow! amazing write...

I enjoyed reading this eloquent poem. I can relate to it. Thank you.

Those brown eyes... love at first sight... everything tender and easy going... but no rush... everlasting... lovely to read... very lovely...

i have brown eyes<3 :) i want to thank you for sharing such a beautiful, amazing poem with me... your insight is incredible, might i add... LOVE. you sir, have made me fall for your poem, it drew me in completely, great work again. praise. Sabrina

there is a reason...for making 'brown eyes blue' and the reason in your poem comes to who...sight is a pretty thing...with or without its wings...you are very good sir...very

i like it...brown eye are beautiful, and i have brown eyes... anyhow your poem is a story of life's journey seeing the world in a beautiful vision. nice poem

brown eyes are beautiful...because they are welcoming.....warm....the color of chocolate.... nice write! .....lovely