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So is this poem about you? explain to me who you are talking about ♥ i really like it!

Watch your comma usage. If you are going to end a line and add a comma, then that is telling the reader to have a quick pause. Sentences in poetry are allowed to overlap into more then one line; as it is not read as line/break/line/break. It is read as line, then, as the line ends and the new line starts; unless it ends with a period (fullstop) it is read as a sentence. here, I will show you an example: - 'However, I, don't care, about being, Right anymore.' Is read as 'However, I don't care, about being, right anymore.' Can you see how it is all broken up and jumpy? One facet of poetry is to give it a smooth flow, if the context is after it. In this case, it, is all, jumpy and, all over the place, when, read outloud. ;)