Sunday, February 1, 2009

Bombs And Tombs Comments

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He blew a bomb,
There was an endless sob.
He charged his sword,
No more was a peaceful world.
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Ravi Panamanna
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Marieta Maglas 07 October 2009

Wonderful abstract poem, very well written. Indeed, the crime changes irreversibly the human being. The message of the poem is very strong and very obvious.We should fight for a better world and for a more beautiful life by peaceful methods. Thank you for sharing. 10++++++++++

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Meggie Gultiano 04 October 2009

A strong message here, Ravi.thanks for this wonderful thought.This is very interesting

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Obinna Eruchie 02 October 2009

What a clear message it is, if we all harbour love and peace in our minds, there is bound to be heaven.

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Luwi Habte 02 October 2009

war upon man is a curse, No injurious thought, let us nurse. love this piece at all nice luwi

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An apt title 'Bombs and Tombs' as man is putting himself in a grave of idiocy. I particularly liked how there was a transformation of the curse and we must believe in peace. A philosophical poem with a strong message for humanity. 10 love Karin

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Rajaram Ramachandran 02 October 2009

More bombs more tombs is a good message one should learn from this nice poem.

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Joseph Poewhit 02 October 2009

Some deep words to ponder in our times

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Surya . 02 October 2009

a war of words and bombs.nicely rhymed. but situation so well brought our. voted10 surya

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Catrina Heart 02 October 2009

A war upon man is a curse, No injurious thought, let us nurse. Man is but blasting bombs, He is preparing countless tombs. ------ War is the ancient art which no one wins...countless tombs that only reminds us of the fragmets of war and reat is history.........................10

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Lady Grace 02 October 2009

nice poem ravi...this is nice..

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 October 2009

the last two lines sums up the concept very well...war seems the most idiotic thing man still continues with...all his scientific inventions take him to make more tombs...man should first invent his 'human'...10

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Randy Hogan 17 February 2009

evil can be so cold! ! while a pure heart is so warm... pro and con.....my heart guides me to the light... for eternal peace....and i can see the light GUIDES YOU TO! ! GREAT Poem 10SSSSSSSSSS

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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