Big Night On The Town Comments

an amazing poem..drunk scenario explained very well

amazing.....a night on the town turns into a masterpiece drunken heartbreak madness in a sick, silly world.

Out of life poem, telling..........10

It's like a scene in a Frank Miller's Sin City GN.

i have a friend who dines inside me.. thats what the future holds...

Love died laughing A timeless line The way love always dies

A great poem. Gripping 'blow-by-blow' imagery in such detail that the reader is fixated upon each word. An interesting and almost careless way of arranging lines. An excellent piece.

I love the dark, but somehow optimistic tone here, shown through the slightly feeling of the small piece of pride still left. I love it for the never-judging sentences and raw, and still sudden words.