So this is it….
I finally found out the truth
Never expected it from you! ! !
I thought you were my friend….
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I like the poem and l have written it to someone who did the same to me
Uuuh! ! Very sad and painful. Your expression was very clear and well understood, my sympathy.
I did have to see what the writer on the top of the list was writing about. I'm sorry this sounds like a page from an angry teenagers diary. The typos from #1 on the list? This poem may appeal to the tween set. You seemed to say the same things over and over just in a different way. The is no depth to this at all. It was all over the place. I can't lie and add some fluffy comment, that is doing you no justice. I'm not trying to hurt your feelings. If you have everyone saying this is awesome all the time and not pointing out the truth you will never grow as a poet. We all want that every day. I've taken my fair share of lumps.
the poem was... ouch! I can relate to this.... they made us suffer...one day they will suffer as well... nice work.... :)
I didnt think it was that deep or great- typical- not bad-
this would make a good song! i agree with everyone down below!
Well written! But when someone betrays me I always get revenge...using martial arts! Lol no thats for self-defense, but sometimes a small little jabs punch doesn't hurt...that much...lol 10/10!
ugghhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...this poem is so true! I couldn't help but think of a couple of 'betrayers' that I've come across in my life. But back to your poem. It Is very well written and I can easily see all of rhe emotion that's behind it. Good Work. Izzey Strange
i liked ur poem, thank u. if it was created out of an inspiration, its a good one. if it was created out of the inspiration that provoked ur pain, its a good one, but remember one thing, the time will come bringing to u a knight, so ur heart will stop bleeding and instead of the scare u`ll find out a lovely flower which is called LOVE... i wish u good luck dear :)
Well-penned, my friend, I have a poem with same tittle, hope you have the time to read it, Love and Peace, Romeo (Thanks for sharing)
A good poem about letting your emotions roll out. Well written.