Your passion, not that I don’t like it;
But at times, turn out to be out of wit
Your tickle, caress and cuddle, I do admit
Honestly, I esteem and enjoy true to heart
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Slow rhyming. well, the poem is extraordinary in deed.. Written in a powerful picturesque language.!
Being a poet is very interesting............. just as being an engineer; you are always trying to be creative and constantly in a contestant race with yourself. This is good rhyming and messaging! tfs! ! !
When you keep nudging me over trivial subjects I have pondered, in vain to oblige, nonetheless Many a nights you kept me rolling, being obsessed Robbing of my much needed good night’s sleep As someone has said, it's an itch that's hard to scratch. Yes, poetry is real. Enjoyed this piece very much. Thanks.m
When we are filled with poetic passion, many a time we are pushed into a restless state! On certain nights, poetic thoughts come crowding and we are unable to put them in the right order or in flowing rhythm. Then we grow restless and sleep deserts us! Poetry sometimes leaves us as an unsatisfied lover, though there is an inseparable bond between a poet and his art! A great write!
Valsa, It's a great thing to have a comment from you, 'cos, even from that I learn something. Thank you so much!
The dedication to the poetry it is a good feeling and this is a good poetry that I feels.
Poetic desire is very passionate but true. This enhances beauty of creativity. Your poetic hunger is wise and you love this as honey. Poetry's tickle, caress and cuddle, we do admit. Amazing perceptional poem is shared is wisely penned.10
Thanks very much Kumar for the unequivocal comment of yours.