Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Tuesday, December 3, 2013

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It is known by this time
You never missed me anytime
It was confusion on my part
You were very sincere from the start
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2013

Reveal of inner voice krishna Middela12 minutes ago It's important introspection.nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2013

OK, but you could use some tips Brooke Corriher5 minutes ago You used some advanced words & everything, It just seems almost childish. Like the words were forced... very planned. Try to write more off the top of your head. To me, that always sounds more sincere. But not bad! Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago dear friend, it is never planned. idea strikes n poem is written, , poem is just end product

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2013

It is known by this time You never missed me anytime

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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