It is known by this time
You never missed me anytime
It was confusion on my part
You were very sincere from the start
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OK, but you could use some tips Brooke Corriher5 minutes ago You used some advanced words & everything, It just seems almost childish. Like the words were forced... very planned. Try to write more off the top of your head. To me, that always sounds more sincere. But not bad! Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago dear friend, it is never planned. idea strikes n poem is written, , poem is just end product
It is known by this time You never missed me anytime
Reveal of inner voice krishna Middela12 minutes ago It's important introspection.nice