Wednesday, May 21, 2008

Balance Comments

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See yourself as a flower waiting to bloom
A Story waiting to be written
An idea beginning to grow
Find yourself winning
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Annie Janine
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 19 November 2008

Dear Elmo - If you can become, who you'd like to be, then there's no more dancing. Ahh, but the dance is such fun! ! Very thoughtful piece! Keep thinking and writing. Blessings - Cheryl

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Alison Cassidy 18 November 2008

Wisdom penned prettily. Love the spiritual dimension of this piece and the phrasing of the poem works a treat too. Reminds me of The Riddle Song - that we used to sing in the Sixties. It begins 'I gave myself a cherry that has no stone'. I am enjoying your work. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Bobbiey Anderson 03 June 2008

i like dis one, keep working on it, small fry lol

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David Desantis 30 May 2008

whoa...that is an excellent poem! ! GReat GREAT JOB. I really admire the flow of it, but also the message of taking the middle road, finding peace but also excitement. Everything in moderation as they say

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