Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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Saturday, November 15, 2008

Are We A Born Rebel? Comments

Rating: 4.9

We come up against laws
That annoy us immensely
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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 May 2009

I have trouble with authority.

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 February 2009

nice concepts... clever write.... honest words....

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Asia Joseph 13 January 2009

I do like it +10.........................thanks for sharing

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Naruto is my fav. just for that.. A 10!

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 25 November 2008

The rebel just needs his cause, look in the mirror whats yours... Andrew 10

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Blue Eyes 24 November 2008

i agree with u everyone has a rebel within but few who let him out.

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Dangsawa Moran Maring 24 November 2008

Its really good poem...its quotionable and i hope you have cultivated a bunch of good answers from many people...Keep moving..Good job.

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so true i love the thoughts in this poem...

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Cheung Shun Sang 22 November 2008

Rotated earth has rotated laws but you are right

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Alison Cassidy 21 November 2008

I believe you can find a rebel in all of us provided you push the right button. And it's important to rebel sometimes, particularly when the laws that imprison are really unjust. Your poem makes the reader think - which is not a bad idea, is it? Good to read you again. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Hana K 21 November 2008

Sometimes listening have a good result

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Yasser Koor 18 November 2008

i like this poem especially when u said: Even when we can’t Make up our mind We don’t want someone else To do it for us good work

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 17 November 2008

another good write by you! keep it up!

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hidden poet 17 November 2008

i love the stanza that says that even when we cant make up our mind we dont want someone else to do it for us. its so true

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C T Heart 15 November 2008

we should always find a way to sort and fix our problems...nice composition.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 November 2008

we are born as rebels. i agree. a good inrospection

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Seema Chowdhury 15 November 2008

find a way to sort out a problem..... lovely advise.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 November 2008

No one is born a rebel, but made a rebel due to adverse enviornmental influence.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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