Apple Picking Comments

Picking the Bestest by Categories.... Nostalgia... aroha Dxx

Herbert, this ought to give you strong messages about the kind of poems you should always write. This is you at your best...memories, use of all the senses and a tug at the heartstrings. More, more! Raynette

Herbert, thank you for this trip through your childhood memory lane. Great mate!

Herbert...this is a wholesome and tangible poem...I can smell the snap! of cool crisp apples and bellows of air~ Superb...now where's that pie?

This takes me back also Herbert, to when we would each hold a corner of a blanket as my Mother with a rake shook the branches of the apple tree. Each apple was then carefully wrapped in newspaper, and stored in a cardboard box which kept them fresh for months. They tasted so good too! A lovely reminder! Very well done. Sincerely Ernestine

Incredible, H. Some of the greatest depth you have ever exhibited here...

Wonderful poem, Herbert. I love these glimpses, these insights you write about from your life. You do it so well. Hugs to you, CJ

This was beautiful....you took me on a nice reminicing (spelling) trip to my uncle's home....Apples, peaches.....he had lots of fruit trees we always had fun :)

What a wonderful trip we've taken with you Herbert! So reminiscent.........I loved it. sincerely, Mary

Beautiful, Herbert, just beautiful. Regards, Lucy