Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Apple Jelly Comments

Rating: 3.5

Apple jelly warms your heart,
Each jar's a little work of art.
Love it on crumpets or on bread -
Glowing rosy-sunset red!
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Susy Evelyne
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Stephen Katona 17 June 2014

I love this poem. It makes me want to re-write some of my poems with richer words and phrases. To maintain rhyme with such realism is a rare gift.

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A good poem and sweetness of apple feeling.

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Heather Wilkins 15 November 2013

very appealing I'll take mine on a hot biscuit please.

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Bri Edwards 14 November 2013

Home·ly 'homle/ adjective adjective: homely; comparative adjective: homelier; superlative adjective: homeliest 1. (of a person) unattractive in appearance. synonyms: unattractive, plain, unprepossessing, unlovely, ill-favored, ugly; More informalnot much to look at she's rather homely antonyms: attractive 2. Brit. (of a place or surroundings) simple but cozy and comfortable, as in one's own home. a modern hotel with a homely atmosphere unsophisticated and unpretentious. homely pleasures susy, being in california via new york state, u.s.a., i am used to defintion #1, above. i'm glad i found #2..... that's what i had guessed. a cute, refreshing, appetite-encouraging poem. yummy. (gee, i see john brown wrote yummy also. thanks for sharing. :) i especially enjoyed: Glowing rosy-sunset red!

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John Brown 02 November 2013

I'll have to get my wife to make some now. Sounds yummy.

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