Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

New York
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New York
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Monday, September 16, 2013

Am I Still On Your Speedail Comments

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Months now, maybe more,
I've not heard from you
And I've grown tired of making excuses
for your slight of hand disappearing act
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Jemima Rivas 18 March 2014

Also beautiful imagery and intertextuality

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Jemima Rivas 18 March 2014

Thank you I bet the same questions come up in everyone's heart when it is broken this poem is wonderful I've felt love and I've been broken and you have nailed them both thank you beautiful write..... But how do we heal can you write one on that when the inspiration hits? thanks again keep writing..

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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

A fitting tribute to broken heart... strangely though, even with the overwhelming sadness and disappointment that your lines convey... there lies within a sweet quality... one of healing brought on by acceptance

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Shaun William Hayes 29 December 2013

Poignant in its pain and honesty, its acceptance and nobility.

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Liliana ~el 18 October 2013

Omigawsh this is amazing! ! Free flow free fall; feeling the warm, significant moments you shared; Remember December(Taylor Swift :): really enjoy your recount of your last December and how you related throwing away precious moments like used wrapping paper; by my mere mistake of trying to hold you truly drives a point that a tight grip often leads to an easy slip.

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S... Che 30 September 2013

awww what a beautiful poem.

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

New York
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