crying in the far dark land
tears there are more than sand
Alone and no one is there to hear
no one think or even feel
the screaming girl out of fear
wishing to die every time i cry
waiting for someone to save me
even if he's far away like a sky.
it is a sad poem, but do not worry, a man will come to wipe your tears away. nice job.
Well written loneliness. Crying is so loud and poetic in rich format...It reveals the poet crossing the limit of poetry. Tune very sad, yet, the loneliness is measurable by the poetic heart who also crying much more loudly getting perplexed with witnessing the brutality of the civilisation where humanity being tortured by the cruel power-hacker. But don't get nervous, keep your pen under your veil and try to translate every moment of your existence and send it to many the readers, they will share the uncertainty of poet's existence. (I don't know have you already read the book Anna Franc's Diary! If not try to collect it. And loudly sing the song.....WE ARE IN THE SAME BOAT BROTHER....... Good poem in its content and form....Write more....more...and Run long.......... 10++++ Regards, pranab
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I would like to translate this poem
Wow what a witty lovely poem! U write so fine! Pls coment my latest poem too.