Air Comments

it is interesting how you package your words. it is magical. i say package because yo have the gift of being concise. i also at times am able to do this, as some of my poems listed here show, but I'm not sure I have the same ability that you display. I really love what you've written so far that I've read. I have pourposefully picked the ones marked as new. if you have any suggestions for poems you think I should or want me to read please tell me.

This is a most special write David....'the wind carried away all, leaving just thoughts of You.' Sounds to me like a tribute to love and is so evident that yes, one can feel it in the air.~ ~ ~mm..xo~ ~ ~

I like this David, it's speaks in hushed tones but nevertheless the message is delivered. Lovely. HG: -) xx

Perfect in its succinctness indeed. Atmospheric and flowing. An unusual approach and it works. t x

This is really beautiful and enlightening! Brillant! Theo

I really liked your poem. Actually, I really like: 'Why write many words when a very few can suffice' all by itself.