Roof-tops quickened
by juvenile shouts
kites are flying
against the sky
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Wow..Wonderful write..Loved it.. How come I missed this beautiful write...
beautiful write enjoyed your write especially when it is raining now
All what all of us see and hear is just a blessing of god.Yes the magical rain too.here the poet says, the deep and deep affectionate love and care on his unique creation the earth.the rain here only a symbol that says how we can change this world peace and treaty
It’s lovely and rich in vocabulary! ! ! You have painted the whole picture so beautifully :)
Life resurrected, after it rained! It briefs all! A lovely poem! !
Beautiful lady, but tell me, do I need to say this after ur laughter came down as first showers?
Aw what a scene of awaited rain has been composed by u, well done...a good diet to nourish the reader's mind
after the rain everything is refreshed and new. lvely images.
life resurrected after it rained what a lovely thought..as if i got relief from unbearable hot......loved it...
:) the poem is raining with such beautiful images typical to rainy season, , , very observant poet and poem, , 'life resurrected.after it rained.. rain, , another name of life, , :)
I love the smell of the earth after it has rained and watching the bird shake off the rain fall.
beautiful lines celebrating the arrival of much awaited rain. not a word outa place....lovely write superb read blessings in the rain drops
Look deep into nature, and then you will understand everything better. Albert Einstein felt like i was the one who was experiencing it......brilliant ma'am
life resurrected after it rained Beautiful development leading to the end. Please read my poem 'Drought Go Away' when you have time. Thank you.
An absolutely beautiful poem Shahzia! Loved the verse 'kites are flying against the sky drawing strokes of brilliant art.' So very descriptive, I could just picture all the colors. Gave it a 10!