Addiction is like a quicksand
That pulls you down
To the deepest and darkest bottom.
Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan- Austin, All Rights Reserved
Yeah that is true. Once you are addicted to something it is very difficult to quit. A nice poem and nice share.
A truth. You bring it using a beautiful analogy. Nice three liner piece.5 stars
To the deepest and darkest bottom........excellent write.....thank u.....anjandev roy.
The downward spiral that follows drug abuse is aptly portrayed in the haiku. A concise and brilliant work of art.
Yes you picked up right...it just pulls you down into dark dungeon. Beautiful description.
As this poem proves, brevity can be ultra powerful in getting the point across!
Wow! What a wonderful, forceful write! Congratulations, .