A World Entombed. Comments

Lovely visuals you have given us here Fay..caves are such great places to visit...Fi 10

As always, a very descriptive write, I don't think I could go into a cave like this so thanks Fay for your guided tour, 10 Lynda xx

I could hear the echoes of voices coming from those cold stone walls and the sound of water dripping in a pool, a hollow haunting sound, a torch beam illuminating jagged rocks and casting eerie shadows, thanks for the cave trip Fay a poem well written

A fascinating glimpse of another world. Great atmosphere in this one. Excellent write, Fay. Love, SandraX

Have visited caves like this...cold and damp places.....atmosphere very strange...well depicted in this poem...10++

Very graphic description of the insides of a cave...good write Fay 10

Was in a cave once - SPOOKY

nice journey into the earth... Never been to a cave, until now!