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Worries about life! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
at first i thought this was categorized as a haiku and i was about to investigate if it followed the 'haiku rules'. Thank goodness i see no mention of haiku in the title or 'topics' or text. Now i can, with every fiber of my consciousness, send this cutie to MyPoemList. to MyPoemList indeed. bri :)
my last of my fingernails broke off That was the least of my worries... ....very sweet
simplicity. showing the trivials and trivials.. fine. indirectly leading us to sense. thanku. tony
Disappointment expressesd in a surprising way and easy way. thanku. tony
Eat more Jello! That's very good for strengthening your fingernails. A great poem. Makes people wonder what your other worries were.