Tuesday, August 8, 2017

A Universe Of Strangers Comments

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Longer the hours you're missed
Shorter my breaths came
Faltering like in a
Swan dance
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Doris Cornago
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Rajnish Manga 08 August 2017

Very thoughtful poem reflecting the pain of being thrown into the abyss of loneliness- no one to listen, no one to talk, no one to understand and care. Thanks.

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Doris Cornago 09 August 2017

True, You're a kindred spirit, Rajnish. Thank you for understanding. :)

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Doris Cornago 08 August 2017

The wooden statue in the photo depicts my exact feeling when my loved is busy and unreachable. I feel like a derelict, old, dried up, my heart breaking into a thousand pieces. The agony in her face mirrors the pain of being lonely.

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2017

Oh! This is so emotional and touching. How strange! We plan and execute our ideas for a life full of happiness with all sincerity but what we get. A life as if it were a punishment. One thing I would like to add that at one time or the other, we all come across such upheavals in life. So, be bold. This will pass over. Thanks, Doris.

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