Since you`ve been loving me
I was given a special gift,
It still sounds so unusual...
Was it your favour to me
...
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This is beautifully expressive with powerful emotion and intimacy. Love it.
yes dear Nivedita, a beating of my beloved`s heart was that special gift of mine. imagine, u have ur heart, but its beating depends on another`s feelings. joy or sadness all is shared between both. that was the point of my poem. thx for ur mark!
Cascade poetry…culminated in …’ The broken beating of your heart! ’ …was it the gift? or you felt it? Melancholy but luxury of readers and poets too…finish is anticlimax Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Truly from the Heart. Enjoyed the read. Well done!
A nice poetic write, emotional in tone...heartfelt and soul-stirring! !
The Russian writer's flavour for details.................well written.10
fine poem.. thank you for visiting me. :) .
Nice so gently poem like a heart of woman....I´m wonder if you write your poems in Russian language...Thank you for sharing :)
thoughtful and beautiful! the way you thought out, really amazing! 10+
The broken beating of your heart has provoked though restlessly. But gift of love has motivated mind with greatness. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10