Sumita Jetley

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Sunday, March 1, 2015

A Simple Smile Is A Simple Matter Of Great Complexity! Comments

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But still, if done nicely.

And well done nicely?
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Dennis Ryan 13 November 2024

Simplicity and complexity, two true together as paradox, contradiction and antinomy rule our complex lives …

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 July 2022

A fantastic poem.....so simple and beautiful

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Prabir Gayen 15 January 2019

Fine poem dear poetess......./////////

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Clinton Siegle 18 February 2018

To smile is to add manners to your face my dear. Your smile is a lovely face dear. Oh dear smile

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Rupert Hentzau 01 November 2017

Just six short likes on a smile, and already I am frowning. The first two lines mangle the English language. I don't know what to make of this attempt. All those question marks show that the poet is doubtful about her attempt at poetry. This is shallow verse. What pains me if the absurd flattery of the comments below. By Dev Anand, Akhtar Jawad, etc. I will only SMILE when all these poets (or poetasters) and their poems are dumped in a municipal garbage truck and their poems incinerated.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 September 2017

A beautiful smile is a gift that we can offer to anyone and you made me smile through your lovely poem.

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Dev Anand 31 August 2017

happy to send u a comment. would u also read my romantic poems.. i shall be happy. dev

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Nice poem. Very nicely written. Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Dev Anand 16 August 2017

all nice....... your smile. especially. simple reflections in the form of a poem.. thank you dear poetess. dev happy to send u a comment now on one of yur poems. please read my romantic poems too. they are simple and u dont need even a minute to read it. thank you. dev.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 July 2017

just smiled wide with broad lips as i read your poem on smile. that was my reaction........ you are making us all smile........ thank you for helping us to smile for a while. may be this smile on my lips will remain the whole day with me making me happy. tony

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Rajnish Manga 29 June 2017

Smile is a beautiful gift of God but only till it is effortless and it comes from within. If it is attempted, it would be a complexity. You have put it quite nicely through some simple probing questions. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 May 2017

nicely, nicely, nicely giving the reader the beauty of your smile and creating a smile on the readers lips.. thank you very much. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 September 2015

i smiled when i read it. i think that was your intention is nt it. you have won here dear Poetess.Sumita thank you

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