But still, if done nicely.
And well done nicely?
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To smile is to add manners to your face my dear. Your smile is a lovely face dear. Oh dear smile
Just six short likes on a smile, and already I am frowning. The first two lines mangle the English language. I don't know what to make of this attempt. All those question marks show that the poet is doubtful about her attempt at poetry. This is shallow verse. What pains me if the absurd flattery of the comments below. By Dev Anand, Akhtar Jawad, etc. I will only SMILE when all these poets (or poetasters) and their poems are dumped in a municipal garbage truck and their poems incinerated.
A beautiful smile is a gift that we can offer to anyone and you made me smile through your lovely poem.
happy to send u a comment. would u also read my romantic poems.. i shall be happy. dev
Nice poem. Very nicely written. Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
all nice....... your smile. especially. simple reflections in the form of a poem.. thank you dear poetess. dev happy to send u a comment now on one of yur poems. please read my romantic poems too. they are simple and u dont need even a minute to read it. thank you. dev.
just smiled wide with broad lips as i read your poem on smile. that was my reaction........ you are making us all smile........ thank you for helping us to smile for a while. may be this smile on my lips will remain the whole day with me making me happy. tony
Smile is a beautiful gift of God but only till it is effortless and it comes from within. If it is attempted, it would be a complexity. You have put it quite nicely through some simple probing questions. Thanks.
nicely, nicely, nicely giving the reader the beauty of your smile and creating a smile on the readers lips.. thank you very much. tony
i smiled when i read it. i think that was your intention is nt it. you have won here dear Poetess.Sumita thank you
Simplicity and complexity, two true together as paradox, contradiction and antinomy rule our complex lives …