A New Wonderland Comments

Beautiful thoughtful poem.10+++

Life bristles with all this hazards and hardships.We cannot be just disdained this way with a mind reluctant to withstand this woe of the evil.They are not for long but they are always.We are thinking of them all the time and therefore it is hurting us.We have to confine ourselves in our own world where only we can explore solace.Hope you will get such an elixir for life.Thanks.Ray Amito...10..

Interesting write Well done

the paradise of solace that we all seek...well put..

Remain untouched by a rose or thorn Immune from ecstasy or mourn........... .. yet no riff or reeks by life across stream soul seems to be free from all by redemption............wonderful philosophy of life that leads to redemption of soul, and ultimate is the salvation, making no distinction happiness and sorrow, love and hate, etc,10++, thanks for sharing

whoa! are you describing heaven here?

thought provoking........well penned

a dreamest poem of world buut

Very powerful expression indeed. But I felt last three or four lines could have been made more explicit.......10

Strong powerful lines pouring poetic frustrations...a good artful write...painting extremities of life...and still wanting to keep away from all of them...ten for you G...

compact composition with fine words........10+

'Making to look down dustbin disdainfully And left to die as fern leaves.' Nice, very nice poem. 10+