Am not discouraged
Processing all this takes time
Life is atrophy
Needn't hurry....or feel discouraged! You can take your own time! After all everyone knows that atrophy will set in gradually in life. You have said so much in barely a few words!
So true MJ. You hit the nail on the head.I think the more we face our mortality the more fully alive we become. Had a near death experience a few years ago and since then I'm on my knees grateful for the amazing gift of existence. What an amazing adventure it all is. Concise and thoughtful poem, Thank you MJ
Thank you so very much, Norah. It is humbling to have a work appreciated by someone who can relate to it through such a profound experience.
Love it! Absolutely brilliant, M.J. It has inspired me to write: Haiku For Today So much apathy From brooding all the time Mind can work miracles
That is a great haiku, Richard. I hope you plan to post it. And thank you so much.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
atrophy: similar to wasting away emaciation withering shrivelling etc. I guess life is. Of course my brain is undergoing atrophy, as is YOURS! ! ! i gave up trying to process the poem. bri :)
O no...Brain atrophy! The worst kind!