A Love Song Comments

you have your voice and it is a tapestry of you, and you are beautiful. you are complex, , you are Bharati you are reflections of faces in the ponds, , you speak with the rhythm of your language and heritage, you speak as God's loved one, and as such you speak a universal language---

A fabulous poem dear poetess. Beautifully composed... loved it.

But ÝOU' are not you YOU'' are that beauty Which fills me with light....I admire this sober expression. A great poem.

A lovely poem... appreciated dear poetess. Stay always happy and blessed along with your beloved family.

Continued.. Shakespeare has used 'most unkindest'. Why can't we

It's fabulous, captivating and sublime as the nectar that relinquishes mortality. Language and literature, though inseparable, have separate purpose. A litterateur is free to cross the framework of grammar when it is necessary to put stress on a particular subject. Shakespeare

As the oxygen filled air Circulating around me And YOU will stay here As a shaft of light And the last piece of my breath ur.... outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Visited time and again.

As the oxygen filled air Circulating around me And YOU will stay here As a shaft of light And the last piece of my breath.... outstanding conceptualization

As the oxygen filled air Circulating around me And YOU will stay here As a shaft of light And the last piece of my breath

Poetess Magadha has rightly pointed out the lovely expression, 'But ÝOU' are not you YOU'' are that beauty Which fills me with light'.....I enjoy reading this fabulous poem time and again!

For I feel ÝOU As the oxygen filled air Circulating around me And YOU will stay here As a shaft of light.....magnificent poetic expression! An excellent piece of poetry! !

On my cloudy sky YOU are the color Which makes the rainbow And YOU appear As the North star......lofty poetic expression! A sweet poem.

Indescribable in words what I feel ineards.

Revisiting. Indeed ma'am this is the true essence of love to feel someone so close and near that nothing can destroy it ever. Ma'am it is refreshing to read your composition.

ÝOU' are that hand Which picks out the thorns.... outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Five stars.

A truly beautiful love poem that captures the real essence of love. Sterling ink!

Oh this love song is echoing in my ears like a tuning fork. To be the beauty, to become the thorn to guard. This conception really makes love meaningful and rashphody. Lovely Bharathi.

A lovely love song... ' YOU are the song of the song-bird Blue of the Blue-sky, and Green of the Green-leaves'...beautiful expression...5 *****

Dear YOU are the song of the song-bird Blue of the Blue-sky, and Green of the Green-leaves It does not matter Where that ÝOU' lives For I feel ÝOU. beautiful. Agreat love poem dear Bharati. tony

Can we explain 'Love' in any simple term? It is a feeling that only a lover knows! From physical to spiritual it encompasses a wide range of feelings and emotions.Thank you poets for expressing your views on the poem.