Thursday, March 1, 2018

A Lizard On The Wall Comments

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An uninvited visitor, making it all
Silently keeps moving, a lizard on the wall

Listen to your heart, when nature flows over
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 14 July 2020

Metaphor is perfect for the poem.

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Tiffany N 27 November 2018

Interesting poem , wisely written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2018

A lizard on the wall slowly and silently moves on. When nature flows with deep nectar lizard gives amazing call to many. With new sunshine every new hope takes flight. Petals capture colours and silver lines motivate mind. This poem is very brilliantly penned with nice imagery...10

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Mihaela Pirjol 02 March 2018

I very much enjoyed reading this poem. Lizards are considered sacred here in Cyprus; we encounter them every single day of the year (for there is sunshine almost every day): sometimes, even indoors, in an harmonious cohabitation.

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A great poem! 02 March 2018

I very much enjoyed reading this poem. Lizards are considered sacred here in Cyprus; we encounter them every single day of the year (for there is sunshine almost every day): they are everywhere, even in the house sometimes; I am so used to seeing them: there is an harmonious cohabitation.

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M Asim Nehal 10 January 2019

Thank u so very much.

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