Monday, July 6, 2009

A Glow - Senryu Comments

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humility glows
a glow which is eternal
arrogance pitch dark
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Patti Masterman 25 October 2009

Enjoyed the comparison between the two qualities; one which absorbs the light around, and one which re-emits it..(smile)

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Mubeen Sadhika 28 September 2009

Good translation. I have read this kural many times. Nice.

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Rishav Rastogi 18 August 2009

Eternal words Sir....wow I am now a fan....

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dr veenaa rai 01 August 2009

words of wisdom. great.

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C. P. Sharma 23 July 2009

Wisdom glows in this poem. CP

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Miriam Maia Padua 22 July 2009

very true..nice thoughts humility shines a wonderful one, Sam... very meaningful.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Surya . 20 July 2009

divinity is light and ignorence dark. hi samanyan you have moved to great heights voted10 surya

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Ravi A 19 July 2009

I too agree with this philosophy.

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Ken E Hall 18 July 2009

a gentle account of humility very nicely put regards

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lovely. lovely lovely. can't fault you on this..... nice

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 July 2009

a glowing senyru...........

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Pandian Angelina 12 July 2009

Thirukural will reach newage youth Maybe become a rap too If you continue with the rest Complete the whole and make a CD Definitely it would take them To practice tapping to its tune! Really, think about it - a complete translation Nothing beyond you, I know! Angel

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Sandra Fowler 12 July 2009

Great souls are often defined by their humility. And the world basks in the glow of their achievements. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra

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Marieta Maglas 11 July 2009

While arrogance means to treat others like a superior person, humility is the disposition to treat others with respect.Well written poem..10+++ from me

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So true you wise poet. Arrogance deserves its fall from grace and humility glowing to eternity is where it should be. 10 Karin Anderson

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Joseph Poewhit 11 July 2009

Humility is a great state of mine for the self.

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Louis Rams 08 July 2009

a heart will always glow in humility. a gr8t write

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Vidi Writes 07 July 2009

In the existence of Pitch Darkness The Glow Shines Else? ? ? Its a truth... All that is good in this world, exists Just at the front of that which is not so good.

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Lynda Robson 07 July 2009

Humility shines bright, arrogance a blackness, wise words again, 10 Lynda xx

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~ Jon London ~ 07 July 2009

Such wisdom in so little words Sam my brother...you are a true wordsmith.....keep expressing that poet soul of yours.....you're a natural 10+++++

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