The sun rises softly, painting hope in the sky,
yet moments slip like grains, through fingers frail.
Mountains loom ahead, their peaks kiss the clouds,
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2) cont'd: My friend, I was so enthralled by your poem that I read it three times to truly inhale the dream. My pick for Poem Of The Day!
WOW! Asim, every line of this exquisite poem fills the reader with hope and joy. It literally took my breath away! Stunningly beautiful, vivid imagery! The kind that only William Blake could paint on canvas and through poetry!
Absolutely Devine! A poem that will forever, Shine. An indispensable, Favorite!
So beautifully profound! .. And Magnificently composed! , , Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Each step a whisper, a dream to inhale. Absolutely beautiful all the way through! ..
Nicely worded poem, Inspiring as well.