M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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M. Asim Nehal
Nagpur
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Friday, November 29, 2024

A Dream To Inhale.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun rises softly, painting hope in the sky,
yet moments slip like grains, through fingers frail.

Mountains loom ahead, their peaks kiss the clouds,
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Gordon Walter 20 December 2024

Nicely worded poem, Inspiring as well.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 December 2024

2) cont'd: My friend, I was so enthralled by your poem that I read it three times to truly inhale the dream. My pick for Poem Of The Day!

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Richard Wlodarski 18 December 2024

WOW! Asim, every line of this exquisite poem fills the reader with hope and joy. It literally took my breath away! Stunningly beautiful, vivid imagery! The kind that only William Blake could paint on canvas and through poetry!

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Anjandev Roy 17 December 2024

Excellent piece.... my friend.... very commendable......

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Sandra Feldman 17 December 2024

Absolutely Devine! A poem that will forever, Shine. An indispensable, Favorite!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 December 2024

The fifth couplet is Amazing TFSBravo! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 17 December 2024

So beautifully profound! .. And Magnificently composed! , , Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 17 December 2024

Each step a whisper, a dream to inhale. Absolutely beautiful all the way through! ..

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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