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Tuesday, August 4, 2020

A Certain Ray Of Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

A certain ray of light lingers for a while
On my desk. Yet it will soon dissolve in time,
Like everything else in this fleeting world.
I gaze at it, as I try to form apt words,
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Shaun Cronick 05 August 2020

Another neat and so concise well written poem Dominic and again another superbly written end line to tie up your beaming poem of light. So astutely imagined and presented. 10++ and again well deserved and your pen does compose many varied themed poems. A great mind at work and a joy to read. Many thanks and take care.

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