A bottle of wine, and a moonlit night,
A little side table, on the sidewalks side,
Soft gentle music, filters through the air,
The breeze blowing gently, through your auburn hair.
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shave off that silly beard and you might actually look presentable-
This time I am going to leave Claudia Krizay's pathetic comment on my poetry. She needs all the attention she can get. Besides, I am tired of removing her diatribes.
Cute reflection on the love of a woman. She is lucky to have you. Good work Juan Jim
This is the first poem I've read of yours, it's beautiful! I look forward to reading some more x
This is very touching, Juan. What a lovely, visual tribute to your wife.
The wonderful beauty of romance at night by the sidewalk on a warm or hot evening, all the rare ingredients which make an exquisite enchanted evening. A treasure to find.
An incredible and great tribute to the wife. A very beautifully written poem for the person you have spent your life with. Just a great write. Lynn
Oh! I bet she loved that one, you devil! Very nicely written. So I got mischievous. I put some of those words in a card and gave them to Pirate Girl, you know see if I got lucky. Little demon must of been on your page. Hell to pay for that! p.s. keep the beard, were pirates of love and fast cars!