Monday, March 30, 2020

A Billion Year Old History Comments

Rating: 4.3

Beneath the barren high ways
Broken bones laid in peace,
Tears never shed by anything,
Cries never heard by anyone.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2020

Beneath the short skyscrapers parties once held. Beneath the barren high ways broken bones laid. This poem expresses pain gained through perception. Little family also with little fingers can gain success and overcome difficulties. Great victory we can gain through humanity. Victory comes through perseverance. An amazing poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned...10

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Thank you for encouraging words

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 March 2020

A very nice poem to read. 'A little family with too little fingers of future, Wading through the manmade hills of adventure, '... is beautiful. Like to read again and again.10++

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Thank you Anil Kumar

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