Friday, May 4, 2018

A Bat On A Broken Wing Comments

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Fleeing darkness from enclosing
Fitted spool on spool threading
Rush to fix the net maddening
Not just my daily usual fling
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Doris Cornago
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Doris Cornago 16 May 2018

For my friend Ravi who went away one summer day, trying to find his way through the maze. Best wishes with your poems.

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Nudershada Cabanes 04 May 2018

A beautifully crafted poem Doris. Image filled and wonderful rhyming of words.10

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Doris Cornago 05 May 2018

Thank you, Nudershada. Bats are wonderful and beautiful creatures, don't you think?

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Doris Cornago 04 May 2018

My reason for writing poems is that they have way of prolonging the ecstasy of a thought - by shortening the distance one has to traverse between thought and action. Does that make sense? Prose has a way of diluting ecstasy by too many layers of clothing concealing the purity and beauty of a thought.: -)

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Doris Cornago 04 May 2018

Juggernaut definition is — a massive inexorable force, campaign, movement, or object that crushes whatever is in its path. It represents for me all the maxed out fears that someone has to cope with - all the unknown factors preventing personal success. If you have this juggernaut and you have stopped short of your plans, remember this - all the good things are on the opposite side of fear, a failsafe way to develop fearlessness, and so, be sure to go past fear, in whatever form.

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Doris Cornago 04 May 2018

The worst blindness is not having any knowledge of self, denying one's existence is precious and one should be grateful for each day that comes. I have made this commitment that I won't let a day pass without a poem as long as I am granted vision. Sightedness is the condition of seeing beyond barriers and handicaps, and reaching out with delight in just being alive.

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