Saturday, February 24, 2007

(580) Nestled Upon The Shore (Fantasy Poem) Comments

Rating: 2.7

Oh beauty, beauty, what do you seek?
Adrift you come to take a peak.
Tis June the month you do embark,
I long to see your body stark.
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Melvina Germain
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Bri Edwards 01 June 2016

I think Disney was making a film nearby. Let's see another.....poem, if not mermaid! :) Bri

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 19 April 2007

Wow Melvina you took me to that Shore and it was beautiful! Your imagery was amazing...Excellent fantasy on a cold snowy day! ((Smile)) Keep up the Amazing work! ! ! ! =Shell=

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Diane Violet 07 March 2007

This is beautiful Melvina...I can clearly picture this through your writing...wonderful! All the best, Diane

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Esther Leclerc 05 March 2007

Ah, the siren call of fantasy, myth and legend, this poem calls to me! I still wish these things were true. Melvina, this is lovely, well done! Esther : ]

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Dee Daffodil 24 February 2007

Absolutely beautiful poem Melvina! ! I can picture this gentle soul upon a shore in the Maritimes! Hugs, Dee

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David Harris 24 February 2007

Melvina, I loved the imagery on this fantasy. Beautiful write. A worthy 10. Mermaids the sirens of the sea. Thanks for sharing it. David

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