Oh beauty, beauty, what do you seek?
Adrift you come to take a peak.
Tis June the month you do embark,
I long to see your body stark.
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Wow Melvina you took me to that Shore and it was beautiful! Your imagery was amazing...Excellent fantasy on a cold snowy day! ((Smile)) Keep up the Amazing work! ! ! ! =Shell=
This is beautiful Melvina...I can clearly picture this through your writing...wonderful! All the best, Diane
Ah, the siren call of fantasy, myth and legend, this poem calls to me! I still wish these things were true. Melvina, this is lovely, well done! Esther : ]
Absolutely beautiful poem Melvina! ! I can picture this gentle soul upon a shore in the Maritimes! Hugs, Dee
Melvina, I loved the imagery on this fantasy. Beautiful write. A worthy 10. Mermaids the sirens of the sea. Thanks for sharing it. David
I think Disney was making a film nearby. Let's see another.....poem, if not mermaid! :) Bri