Saturday, October 4, 2008

.5. I Lived My Life Comments

Rating: 4.9

I lived my life the best I could
Did the things I thought I should
Some turned bad but most turned good
I’d do the same I know I would
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David Threadgold
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Ernestine Northover 04 October 2008

Excellent write, very good rhyming, nicely flowing too. Definitely a winner. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Tia Maria 04 October 2008

And did it myyyy waaay. Oooo Frankies got nothing on you. That was great :) 10

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