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Well it's been a few months now since we last spoke And I'm just hoping that you liked what I wrote I put a lot of thought, to what I wanted to say Way back when on Valentine's Day ....well it is depiction of true feeling form inner cell. it is ralised but in reverse way.. so much dishearteningfor poet to grasp it... it happenes sometimes.. well written poem...10 read mine miss i miss u, mary tomarry, how are u and no separate ways...comment

This poem flows nicely. The rhyming works very well. I'd love to hear the tune! !