Amanda Lukas

Amanda Lukas

Ft. Lauderdale, FL
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Amanda Lukas
Ft. Lauderdale, FL
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Friday, February 23, 2007

(19) A Long List Of To-Do's (And A Couple Of To-Don'Ts) Comments

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My list of things to do
just seems to keep growing longer.
Keep your office clean,
make Bill's coffee stronger
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Tom J. Mariani 06 November 2007

Your referring to yourself in the second person in this was a little unique and worked for me. It made your to-do list almost look like you were doing all that stuff for someone else. For me it showed how one can get too busy doing things to have time for themselves. I have a TO BE DONE TODAY page from my Day-Timer taped on the door to my home office. The only thing on the list is 'Get rid of the to-do list.' Oh - I should now add 'Continue to be careful with hot coffee.' Thanks for your comments. Tom

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Kish Brown 23 February 2007

Hi Amanda! I don't know if its a coincidence or what... that Your list of 'Things to do ' matched my list of things to do..... Just a little difference that instead of Dogs I have 2 Cats to feed! I am both Happy, Amused and Surprized all at the same time. Good Job! Keep it UP! Bye!

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Ronald Stroman 23 February 2007

i have a do & do not do list. but since this is about the do list... i know if i keep doin' what i'm doin' (which is really none of your business. lol) i'll keep gettin' what i been gettin'. Your poem got me poetically motivated... to do something poetic.

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Amanda Lukas

Amanda Lukas

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