It's been torn out my veins still pumping,
He's holding it in his hands still thumping.
His name has been engraved so deep,
I just sit there close my eyes and weep.
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Very strong emotions, vividly expressed. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards, Sandra
Rather startling images but the pain does get through to the reader.
good one....but pain is the reality of life...have you seen Cinema paradiso?
how lonely we feel when our love is lost great write thanks for sharing peace jibin
heart when broken by blow of hand tears as flow across the sorrow blood when oozes into the rhymes green secret of all sacreds when pierced by the arrows.........really hurtful love being apart, well penned, i admire,10/10, thanks for sharing
A heartfelt poem (excuse the pun) full of emotion and pain, very well written, Lynda xx