Friday, June 10, 2005

0037 Ode To The Patience Of A Yawning Audience Comments

Rating: 2.3

O come sweet sleep, and close my eyes with verse!
with drowsy metre, meet a deeper sleep;
to sleep, to dream, I never am averse -
to slumber numbed by poet's numbers deep;
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Michael Shepherd
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Chuck Audette 02 September 2009

A perfect sonnet, with a sense of humor at itself. I don't understand why this has such a low rating. 10 from me, to be sure... -chuck

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Michael Shepherd 11 June 2005

It would be a help to suggest the improvements, John

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John Tiong Chunghoo 10 June 2005

a very creative piece though it can be improved upon.

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David Nelson Bradsher 10 June 2005

I'm so pleased to see you writing so many sonnets lately, Michael, and you write them so well. You're truly a talent in any style. Nicely done.

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