sounds really great. you are showing your emotions nice. you will have great future in poetry. i invite you to read my poems. as a friendly look.
dear marvin.. how I wish..humanbeings..learn to be 'magnanimous'.... to all LIFE & living & non living elements.... good write.. regards..
I am able to see the beautiful mango trees by reading your poem and feel the rich taste of mangoes on my tongue! Wonderful poem! Thank you Marvin for sharing!
Ibam writing a paper on Lifespan and would like to use part of his poem