You are devoted and art loving, woman, i feel glad and blessed, when you read and comment my little poem.
you are gifted writer and your poems mesmerise.........lest the world see.......
Lady Grace ….alike a blooming flower spreading sweet fragrance in the air. ….alike a child behaves joyfully innocent and full of love. ….alike a clown that influences one's heart to laugh and smile. ….alike a princess so adorable in the evening sun and stars. ….alike an angel touches your soul on the magical spell of expressions. Ocean sky soon you'll be Flying high diving low In the deep blue sea Of perfect poetry Tons of love and thanks, Catrina Heart
I JUST REREAD DEPARTURE AND HAD TO GIVE YOU 10 AGAIN, I EVEN PUT IT ON MY FAVORITE LIST OF POEMS, I READ SIMPLE WISH N GAVE IT A 0, LOL, LADY YOU KNOW IM LYING I GAVE YOU A 10 AGAIN, MY POEM FRIEND..EVERY POEM WRITER BELIEVES THEY CAN WRITE, OR THEY HAVE TALENT.BUT THATS LIKE SAYING EVERY1 CAN DANCE, SING OR COOK..IVE GOTTEN LIKE A 100 INVITES IN THE PAST 5 DAYS, AS IM SURE YOU HAVE, AND I EVEN READ EVERY1, ALL THE WAY THRU, EVEN IF ITS DREADFUL, LMAO..DO YOU DO THE SAME? I DO RESPOND, AND NEVER LIE, AND I ALWAYS VOTE HONESTLY...SO ITS SO HARD WHEN THE SAME COUPLE OF PEOPLE KEEP SENDING YOU INVITES, AND YOU DREAD EM, BUT DO IT BCUZ YOU WOULD LOVE EVERY1 TO READ YOUR OWN..IN ALL HONESTY THERE ARE 01 PEOPLE WHOSE POEMS I ENJOY, DONT MIND READING..THERE ARE ONLY 3 POETS THAT I HAVE GIVEN 10S...MORE THEN ONCE..YOUR IN THAT 3.#1 ON MY LIST.THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SENDING ME THAT 1ST INVITE SO NOW I CAN READ POEMS BESIDES MY OWN THAT I ACTUALLY LOVE N ENJOY..IM NOT BEING PATRONIZING..IM ALL ITALIAN N 4M JERESY..US ITALIAN, JERESY WOMEN TELL IT HOW IT IS..BY THE WAT I DONT REMEMBER IF I SENT YOU THE INVITE 2 READ MY LATEST 3 POEMS, LAST 5 DAYS, IVE BEEN GETTING CHEMO-RADIATION TREATMENTS N I TEND TO BE 4GETFUL AFTER EM, AND TIRED...PLEASE READ IN THE MIDDLE, FIGHTING TIME,6 ACTS/ROLES...PLEASE READ, VOTE, N REPLY...IM ADDING 3 NEW 1S SOMETIME LATER...JUST WANTED TO SAY HI TO ALL MY FRIENDS..OH N HAVE YOU GOTTEN THIS EMAIL ON YOUR POEMHUNTERS COMMENT BOX 4M A LADY NAMED ELIZABETH..SOME KINDA SCAM ABOUT INHERITING MONEY....HOW ARE THEY ABLE TO DO THAT..OH AND IF YOU GET TIME AFTER READING THIS BOOK I JUST WROTE U..LOL...READ THIS POEM CALLED, 'SMUDGE OF BLOOD'...4GOT THE WRITE, THEY JUST SENT ME AN INVITE..TALK ABOUT A REAL TEAR JERKER, , , ,
I JUST REREAD DEPARTURE AND HAD TO GIVE YOU 10 AGAIN, I EVEN PUT IT ON MY FAVORITE LIST OF POEMS, I READ SIMPLE WISH N GAVE IT A 0, LOL, LADY YOU KNOW IM LYING I GAVE YOU A 10 AGAIN, MY POEM FRIEND..EVERY POEM WRITER BELIEVES THEY CAN WRITE, OR THEY HAVE TALENT.BUT THATS LIKE SAYING EVERY1 CAN DANCE, SING OR COOK..IVE GOTTEN LIKE A 100 INVITES IN THE PAST 5 DAYS, AS IM SURE YOU HAVE, AND I EVEN READ EVERY1, ALL THE WAY THRU, EVEN IF ITS DREADFUL, LMAO..DO YOU DO THE SAME? I DO RESPOND, AND NEVER LIE, AND I ALWAYS VOTE HONESTLY...SO ITS SO HARD WHEN THE SAME COUPLE OF PEOPLE KEEP SENDING YOU INVITES, AND YOU DREAD EM, BUT DO IT BCUZ YOU WOULD LOVE EVERY1 TO READ YOUR OWN..IN ALL HONESTY THERE ARE 01 PEOPLE WHOSE POEMS I ENJOY, DONT MIND READING..THERE ARE ONLY 3 POETS THAT I HAVE GIVEN 10S...MORE THEN ONCE..YOUR IN THAT 3.#1 ON MY LIST.THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SENDING ME THAT 1ST INVITE SO NOW I CAN READ POEMS BESIDES MY OWN THAT I ACTUALLY LOVE N ENJOY..IM NOT BEING PATRONIZING..IM ALL ITALIAN N 4M JERESY..US ITALIAN, JERESY WOMEN TELL IT HOW IT IS..BY THE WAT I DONT REMEMBER IF I SENT YOU THE INVITE 2 READ MY LATEST 3 POEMS, LAST 5 DAYS, IVE BEEN GETTING CHEMO-RADIATION TREATMENTS N I TEND TO BE 4GETFUL AFTER EM, AND TIRED...PLEASE READ IN THE MIDDLE, FIGHTING TIME,6 ACTS/ROLES...PLEASE READ, VOTE, N REPLY...IM ADDING 3 NEW 1S SOMETIME LATER...JUST WANTED TO SAY HI TO ALL MY FRIENDS..OH N HAVE YOU GOTTEN THIS EMAIL ON YOUR POEMHUNTERS COMMENT BOX 4M A LADY NAMED ELIZABETH..SOME KINDA SCAM ABOUT INHERITING MONEY....HOW ARE THEY ABLE TO DO THAT..OH AND IF YOU GET TIME AFTER READING THIS BOOK I JUST WROTE U..LOL...READ THIS POEM CALLED, 'SMUDGE OF BLOOD'...4GOT THE WRITE, THEY JUST SENT ME AN INVITE..TALK ABOUT A REAL TEAR JERKER, , , ,
Storm is coming User Rating: 10.0 /10 (8 votes) - vote - 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 E-mail this poem to e friend Send this poem as eCard Add this poem to MyPoemList Print friendly version there would be another storm a warning from heavens above clouds filled with water mirage fades its shapes... cloud king brings heavy rain pour unto the princess' heart golden tears filled the air inspires nature all at once... a soft voice...a hunger beast a loud laugh against humble cry where is peace? ..where it be? can i see it in your eyes? ... --------------- Hi Grace the poem should end there. You captured what it is important and ended it with question marks, that let us floating over clouds. The second part just brakes my imagination and my interest. You are a good romantic poet.
story so true and heart felt. good work kiddo! you have scored points proudly! : -)
Lady Grace, Redlepz..a wonderful, sweet poetess... who writes what's in her heart and mind.. A wonderful friend...a wonderful poetess...all in one...