*Please Comment on my poems! * I love writing poems and dream of writing books. Only as a hobby though.
I also like to give my poems weird names. I don't write my poems the same way each time. Each has their own rhythm, while only a few rhyme.
I've noticed how titles affect a poem. If titled first the poem is controlled and ordered. If titled last, the poem flows with a life of its own. Both are excellent ways to write. One is about finding the words to convey, and the others is about searching for what to say.
Requiem for a dream
by sound so sweet
dreams of escape lay at its feet
by meaning so morbid
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a song is a poem in motion
riding the wave
soaring the sky
falling with a thud
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Memories fading,
mind erasing,
losing grip on reality.
Trying to remember,
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All alone you are,
And all alone you’ll stay,
For you never let love come,
And never let it fly away.
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