Zahir Kijani Comments

Upon googling 8-5-08 eclipse, got Corey's poem about an argument between the sun and the moon as to who should survive the eclipse. My younger sister committed suicide that night. I'm quite sure it was after an argument with her son. The poem makes me think what went down between two very strong opposing forces, sun and moon, mother and son. After all, who came first, the sun or the moon? Doesn't the foolish moon realize it would not exist if it weren't for the sun? Thank you for the poem!

i like this poem////

I like the style of your writing. It has the attack of a street rap, and the imagery is great. Awesome stuff!

The poem '4ever My Friend' is really really good. I could actually feel the emotion behind it. I hope that things work out for you two! The fact that you two are already friends may help you out a little bit, since you already know each other so well.

All of your poems are really good.

YOUR POEM A DAY IN MY LIFE. IT IZ SO DEEP AND I LIK IT. CUZ I CAN RELATE 2 IT IN SO MANY WAYS. UR A GREAT WRITER KEEP IT UP. UR AMAZING........

i luv that poem 4eva my friend so much. bcuz i understand where ur coming from that waz amazing. =)

I knw corey personally. &&honestly he is weird. but dont get meh wrong. i like weird. :) he is sooo unique. aint no1 quite like corey. he is so nice &sweet &really caring. &i very well knw, some of these poems is about meh. but all of his poems have meh thinking! ? because i can relate. dats y we is// or at least was good friends. &&2 meh he will always b more than a poet but a friend. some1 who has always been here for meh. even when i honestly didnt want him 2. i gave him cross emotions...&broke his heart. although im sorry it doesn't make meh feel any betta. thus... now he is knowing as my enemy or stranger, , because as long as we dont really talk dat much &wat not. emotions will not appear making it hard for meh 2 know between wat i want or need. i made a desicion on wat i want//&need but i honestly dont knw if i made thee right desicion: ( quick or threet? ! smh. P.S. i changed my bio.

Corey you are truely a talent artist that paints with words.Even in the darkness your words have a shing light of a meaning.

I just started reading Corey Threet and I am hooked. I sure will come back to you. You awoke my feelings of friendship for an old friend.

Good. Keep writing in the same path, your style is true and your talent is needed. Too many writers and rappers feel like they have to sell it...This is art from your head, paintings with words. Stay true to yourself and if you're about to say something in a verse don't hesitiate, run with it. Your E-book is advanced and if you keep at it you will master your craft for sure.

Like the rest of us who tend to notice the darker corners of life, you must continue to use your words to illuminate them. You are good.