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You show some promise, but the archaic language lets you down. Try to read some good contemporary poets and expand your thoughts without the restriction of form.
what a meaningful poem that taught me the meaning of sacrifice, the woman decided to make a song of her pains to make the rich happy although the song will never reach the rich
Tim Turpin he was gravel-blind,And ne'er had seen the skies :For Nature, when his head was made,Forgot to dot his eyes. So, like a Christmas pedagogue,Poor Tim was forced to do -Look out for pupils; for he hadA vacancy for two.