Suman Kumar Das


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  • Rookie - 474 Points Mike Barrett (12/8/2013 1:43:00 PM)

    Suman, I've reviewed all 13 of your poems. No doubt you have a gift.....I find the imagery in each quite impressive, but I feel that you might want to polish the grammar and punctuation a bit more so the reader is concentrating 100% on the intended message you wish to convey.

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Broken Babble

Wish I to paint your rosy lips,
Raven tress, also silvery face.
But all the tints fail to match such glimpse.
Nor my fingers can shape the grace.

Wish I to compose your giggle,
With the sound of bangle and anklet.
But no flute is played to mingle,
So soft, yet sweet note.

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