Windowpane Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Windowpane

Rating: 2.8


Life is a contained existence

that each person solely owned

sharing it with others is a choice

like peeping through the window

could help decide whether or not

to open the door for relations



Looking through

one sees the panprama

that shows loveliness or malice

the world has possessed

as it displays the sceneic realities

of the human existence



Our hearts too mimic

the opening of a pane

when it dares to venture

as its feeling bests for love (or hate)

upon reckoning of freedom

through the windowpane

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

Great poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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