Success Story Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Success Story

Rating: 5.0


Does success blind the man completely?
Not wait and go for its show immediately?
If he is earthly man then will slowly digest,
Means and ways set first and then suggest,

Only clever and seasoned will be enjoying,
All of sudden success may lead to annoying,
Way of living may bring tremendous change,
Confidence enhanced and disorderly manage,

Somebody may diversify to honouable living,
Purchase of luxurious cars and self driving,,
Honest may prefer and turn to charity reviving,
Rest may go for sight seeing and sea diving,

It brings dramatic change in way of thinking,
Sudden urge and change some time lead to sinking,
Arrogance and power blind a person,
As sudden change you may find with season,

You look towards fellow brothers as inferior creature,
Their hello and address bite you as vulture,
You feel their company danger for future,
Ill feeling and distrust in mind nurture,

This all takes away from main stream,
Success story makes you to believe as dream,
You feel as if you had God given chance,
Forget the past and visit the club for dance,

Drink, drug and smacks are natural ally,
Money in hand doesn't look silly,
Pushed to the dark as time go on,
No way to come back, not even soon,

It will be nightmare or bad dream,
Success may blind but not allow to scream,
You will be completely cut off from friends,
Down to earth when success story ends

Success has another story to tell,
People have learnt how to remain well,
Act as humble and good ideas sell,
Where does then bad or descend the hell

Success Story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suwarna Patil 14 August 2009

sometiems it blinds us...10

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Kant Shri 15 August 2009

success blinds all....10

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Durga Sethani 16 August 2009

blinds us altogether sometimes...10

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Argum Sheth 16 August 2009

i tblinds not all but some....10

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Rupa Shah 19 August 2009

it makes u arrogant....10

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Sunita Rao 10 October 2009

In one corner lies strong desire, Struggle and efforts more to acquire, Not necessary but still to require, Much to the discomfort and ire,

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Venkat Ramanna 10 October 2009

If he is earthly man then will slowly digest, Means and ways set first and then suggest

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K.v. Subbarao 10 October 2009

Does success blind the man completely? Not wait and go for its show immediately? If he is earthly man then will slowly digest

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Darshna Chopra 10 October 2009

Somebody may diversify to honouable living, Purchase of luxurious cars and self driving, ,

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Sulochna Pandit 09 October 2009

Does success blind the man completely? Not wait and go for its show immediately? If he is earthly man then will slowly digest,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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