Soldier Poem by Lil Phoenix

Soldier

Rating: 5.0


It's good to feel pain, It lets me know I'm alive.
Roll with the thunder, Know that I'll survive.
March on I'm a soldier, No matter the war.
Keep my head up I'm a soldier, I'm tough to the core.
My fear is my weakness, Let my weakness be gone.
I know I'm a soldier, I've been one all along.
We are picking our battles, Fighting our wars.
We hold the weight of the world, Our minds and bodies are sore.
But push on I'm on a soldier, The stronger of some.
A soldier of life, In an army of one.
It's good to feel pain, It lets me know I'm alive.
Take the jolt of lightning, Know that I'll survive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Sessor 13 May 2008

Great poem! ! It flows beautifully and you can feel all the emotions. It makes the reader feel how a soldier feels and appreciate what they are doing. I love it! =)

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Jade Fish 17 April 2008

it was good as always! ! !

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very good that is inspirational

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wow! ! ! dang...another good one hun i love it. real strong in feelings.

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