So Lonely Poem by Payyton Egerstaffer

So Lonely

Rating: 5.0


So lonely and so cold
My heart is breaking
In their terrible hold

Pity was never their style
I’m sorry it’s been so long
Such a long long while

I’ve missed you so
But our hello is going to have to wait
As I tackle this deadly foe

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Harrison 18 August 2009

Your grasp of different styles and rhyme schemes never ceases to amaze me.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 November 2008

Loneliness has killed ya but togetherness is looming juz around the corner of your broken heart.Great piece Payyton!

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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