Raw Poem by Savannah Churchill

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I woke up this morning feeling raw and wide open
With my mind spiraling into nevermore
Knowing I will step out the door
Into today's unknown
A piece of my life that will be organically grown

Knowing I will go through this day
With an inside feeling
That will leave me reeling
For a passionate encounter
That will put my head on the floor
and my feet on the ceiling

Before going to bed
I sit and think in retrospect
That I do not know what will come to me
but only hope I will be ready
For anyone that comes my way
and what they might do or say
So that when the time is right I'm ready to play

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Chaim Wax 25 December 2005

of course every zen master has said just now all there is no other time and to live just be ready to accept everyting a fine poem

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it doesn't do it at all!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 13 May 2005

You think just spreading yourself wide open, intellectually of course, would do the trick? Your poetry may not quite do it. H

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